Proper Manuscript Format for a Novel

by Dax MacGregor
Before sharing your novel, you need to get it into the proper manuscript format. Here is what you need to know.

The basic rules for formatting a novel manuscript are detailed below. Many agents and publishers have a preferred format. Be sure to tailor your submission to meet their preferences. In most cases, the changes required will be minor tweaks.

When to Format

You may decide to format your manuscript when you start — or you may choose to do it once you finish.

Personally, I start, from the first word, writing in manuscript format. I have several reasons:

  1. Once you set up your word processor, writing in manuscript format doesn’t take any extra effort.
  2. I find it easier to review and edit my work when it’s formatted this way.
  3. I often share my work-in-progress with other writers for critique and they expect to receive it in manuscript format.

Manuscript Format Basics

These guidelines apply to the entire manuscript.

  • Font: 12 point Times New Roman or Courier New. (Note: I find Times New Roman easier to read.)
  • Font Color: Black
  • Margins: 1 inch to 1.5 inches all the way around.

Title Page

A novel manuscript requires a title page formatted in this manner:

  • Contact information: In the top left corner, insert your name, address, phone number and email address. single-spaced and left-justified.
  • Title: Centered one-third to one-half the way down the page
  • Author: Centered one double-spaced line below the title. Example: by Dax MacGregor. Note: If you write using a pen name, show that here; but be sure to show your real name in the contact information above.
  • Word Count: On finished manuscripts, you will need to place the word count centered one double-spaced line below your name. Round to the nearest thousand. Example: 120,000 words.

Chapter Title Pages

A Chapter Title Page is formatted just like all other content pages, with the following exceptions:

  • Page Break: Start each chapter on a new page.
  • Chapter Title: Center the title about one-third to one-half the way down from the top

Content Pages

Format the main content of your manuscript per these guidelines:

  • Page Header: At the top right of every page, except the title page, display:

Your last name / The book title / Page Number Example: Dax MacGregor / My Story / 152.

  • Page Numbers: Pages are numbered continuously, with page one being the first page after the title page.
  • Paragraphs: Indent the first line of every paragraph by about 1/2 inch.
  • Line Spacing: Double-spaced.
  • Scene Breaks: Insert a new line with a single hash mark “#” in the center. Optionally, you may use three asterisks in place of the hash mark.
  • Dialogue: Start a new paragraph every time you change speakers. There are so many special formatting rules that apply to dialogue that it has its own page: How to Format Dialogue.
  • Separation between sentences: One space. (I learned to type when two-spaces after each period was the rule. I still catch myself inserting extra spaces. Periodically, I do a global search-and-replace to eliminate them.)
  • Italics: Italicize (The old school rule was to underline all italicized words.)
  • The End: Center the word “END” after the final line of your story.
How To Indent First Line
How To Indent First Line
Sample Manuscript Title Page
Sample Manuscript Title Page
Sample Chapter Title
Sample Manuscript Chapter Title
Sample Content Page
Sample Manuscript Content Page

Mistakes to Avoid

Be sure your manuscript doesn’t contain any of these common pitfalls:

  • Don’t indent using tabs or spaces. Use the format paragraph feature of your word processor. (See image on the right.)
  • Don’t justify your paragraphs. Your right margin should be ragged. Justifying creates uneven spacing between the words that makes it harder to read.
  • Don’t place extra lines between your paragraphs.
  • Don’t restart page numbers with each new chapter.
  • Don’t forget to do one last spell check before printing.

Printing

These days, agents and publishers will request manuscripts to be submitted electronically. However, if you need to submit a paper version, be sure to:

  • Use high-quality paper, 20 or 24 pound, with a brightness score in the high 90s. You want to make the right impression. Don’t skimp on cost here.
  • Single sided.
  • Print your manuscript on a good quality printer, preferably a laser printer.

Final Notes

I’ve assembled this information based on recommendations from multiple references, discussions with experts and personal experience. I update it as the standards evolve. Remember, before you submit a manuscript to an agent or publisher, be sure to review their specific requirements.

You might enjoy this article: Farhad Manjoo: Space Invaders: Why you should never, ever use two spaces after a period.

If you have something to add or corrections to offer, please leave your comments below.

Comments

96 Comments

  1. Jack

    everyone tells others ‘how to do it’, writing like any art form belongs to the creator…. It is the way your inner feelings are received by the observer. Image anyone directing
    the artist of an abstract painting “how to do it’
    That is what i feel, that is how i write my manuscript.
    Jack Redlum

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  2. Anon

    Jack, this is not an article telling you how to write a manuscript, but how to format it for submission. Most, if not all, publishers will require certain formats when dealing with manuscripts. This is for ease of reading and then editing, adjusting format for publish. The generic of the format is that when the manuscript is scent to formatting for publish it creates a flowing book without creating extra work of having to go through and fix spacing and other errors created from spacing start of paragraphs instead of using the paragraph indent option, or justifying a line, that type of thing. Imagine having to go through a 300 page manuscript, page by page, looking for these errors because the author ignored proper format etiquette.

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  3. Casey

    Jack, this isn’t to say this is exactly how it will be published either. This is to save the people you expect to assist you with your writing trouble. No author can exist and succeed without the help of others, so it is best to format it to the way in which the agents, editors, etc like and expect it. That shows commitment and professionalism.

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  4. Lenna Wyatt

    Although I’ve written many short stories and articles this is my first novel. Took me several years to write it and 20 revisions until I got sick of it but sent it to an editor who said it was so good it should be made into a movie. Now to get motivated to fix all the corrections and suggestions. Your article is really a great help to me. The only thing I wish is that Comic Sans would be an acceptable font. I find it so much easier to read than that common Romans or Courier. I have to fight with this new laptop my kids got me because it seems to do what it wants to do, especially with indentations and spacing. I had Word Perfect before and it was so easy and let me be creative. Thanks for listening. I’m putting this article in my favorites to refer to. No website yet, the one that popped up below is not set up yet.

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    • Pattie schardin

      Gosh I’m. Nervous about submitting my first novel especially the formatting do I have the show title on every page page numbering where. Is,Olson-Out of Her Element 12 point each page. Thank you for your time. By the way I’m 84 yrs young so have patience 😉. 712patio@gmail.com

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  5. Mandy Wallace

    Thanks so much for this! Especially for clarifying the underline versus italics issue. Much appreciated.

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  6. Mkyonmibck

    I have a story that must be told. If it were not for articles such as this I would be totally lost (not to say I am actually found). I so understand the reasoning behind spacing rules and format stability. On the other hand my story can’t be told without Jack’s expertise as well. It is a story the average editor will not comprehend as truthfulness. My art will be mixing Jack with Anon.

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  7. Nitish Raj

    Should the synopsis and sample chapters would be in the same attachment of the novel or would it be multiple attachments?

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    • Dax MacGregor

      Nitish,

      Requirements of each agent and publisher vary. Here is what Harlequin specifies:

      • Your query letter should start on page 1 of your file. Also, your query letter should be no longer than one page and must include your complete name, your pen name if you write under one, email address, postal address and phone number, and your story pitch (i.e. a brief description or teaser about your story). We need to know the line the manuscript is intended for, the word count and status (complete/partial), any publishing history and writing awards.
      • Please include a synopsis between 500-1000 words. Your synopsis should provide an overview of your story—including the ending! Please note that your synopsis should start on page 2, and your manuscript should directly follow.

      Before you submit, be sure to check each agent’s/publisher’s requirements.

      Good luck!

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  8. Dianna

    Do you add a table of contents page? If so, how to format. Also, can you add a foreword page?

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    • Dax MacGregor

      Dianna,

      For novels, a table of contents in your manuscript is generally discouraged. It may be added as part of the publication process. However, agents and publishers will instruct you to omit a table of contents.

      If your foreword is part of the story, you may include it. Otherwise, don’t include it when submitting your manuscript.

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      • adam

        OMG IS THIS THE REAL DAX MACGREGOR? 🙂

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          • peter dodds

            why is the photo over the text?

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  9. Becky

    Sometimes authors use asterisks to show time passage. I’ve also seen it to show scene changes. If you shouldn’t leave more than a double space between paragraphs, how do you show in the manuscript those changes in the story? Thank you for the help.

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    • Dax MacGregor

      Becky,

      The passage of time between paragraphs is a scene change and should be handled as noted above, by a single hash mark or three asterisks centered in the line that separates the paragraphs.

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      • Wade Gonsoulin

        I have a similar question to this.
        In some novels I’ve read, they will use the 3-asterisk method for showing passage of time or scene-change, but then in other places in the same book they will simply skip a couple of lines and start a new, non-indented, paragraph to show the same. What would be the reason for this?
        Thank you!
        -Wade

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  10. musyoka mukai

    Should the synopsis and sample chapters would be in the same attachment of the novel or would it be multiple attachments?

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    • Dax MacGregor

      The submission requirements vary significantly between different agents and publishers. You will need to package it differently for each. Let me give you some examples.

      • Shadow Mountain won’t accept mail or email submissions. You need to use their website form where you paste in your cover letter and synopsis and then attach your complete manuscript.
      • Kensington Publishing Co. accepts only email submissions with query letter be in the body of the email and no attachments. If they are interested, they will request more.
      • Penguin’s DAW Books will not accept any electronic submissions. They want paper (print on one side only, thank you). They ask for cover letter and complete manuscript (no synopsis or sample chapters).
      • Harlequin wants your query letter, synopsis and manuscript to be in one file with pages numbered consecutively, starting with the query letter.

      As you can see, there is no standard. Good luck.

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  11. Sabrina Collins

    So do we underline or italicize all italicized words?

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  12. Alex

    Notes about pronunciation of characters names can be included into the manuscript?

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  13. Dax MacGregor

    Interesting question… If you are writing fiction, you should avoid anything that pulls the reader out of the story. So I would handle this by showing other characters struggling with the name and learning the correct pronunciation.

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  14. Linda Ballard

    Stupid question. When you say that each chapter should begin on its own page, do you mean a completely new sheet of paper? Or can it be on the back sheet of the last chapter? I am assuming that the manuscripts can be written front and back of each paper and not only one clean sheet per page unless the publisher requests otherwise.

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    • Dax MacGregor

      Hi, Linda. When you have a new chapter, just start it on a new page. Whether that page is front or back doesn’t matter.

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  15. James Waltz

    I’ve been writing my manuscript using just the default Calibri style in Microsoft Word, and now want to switch to a standard format. The body paragraphs are a simple matter of changing the typeface, however I’ve styled my chapter headings in a particular way: each “chapter” is currently unnumbered, instead headed by a location and date on their own lines, both italicised and bolded, and separated from the body by a blank paragraph. How might I go about translating that into a standardised format? Thanks.

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  16. wes horton

    Hi James, I would dump Word and buy Page Four and Smart Edit from http;//www.sofwareforwriting.com. it should just come if you search Page Four This is a writing program just for us. I have Smart Edit which can polish a m.s. like glass. Both are great. However, don,t mix the fonts up, they are different. The handing of chapters is great and it has everything a writer needs to turn out a top looking m.s. Wes Horton W.A

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  17. Avery Oldakowski

    Hi. If you are using a pen name, should you put your real last name on the heading of each page or your fake last name? Thanks.

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    • Dax MacGregor

      Use your pen name on the header of each page.

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      • coyoteclaws

        That’s interesting, this differs from Shunn’s suggestion. Shunn is the mostly commonly cited for mss format (I’ve seen a lot of references to it when reading writing blogs), McIntryre’s work is not as current (the latest I found was from ’08, and Shunn updated his in ’14). See: https://www.shunn.net/format/story.html

        Of course, the difference between Shunn, McIntrye, and your article for formatting isn’t that great.

        Personally, I’d prefer what you state, using the byline name in the page header, but of course, I’d always go with the market’s request if it differs.

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  18. Myra

    Hi, I’m writing a children’s picture book and each page of the book will only have a few sentences.
    How do I denote a new page on the manuscript if 4 pages of the proposed book fits into one page of the manuscript?
    Thank you

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    • Dax MacGregor

      Myra,

      You should manually insert a page break to separate the pages.

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  19. Gary

    Can you clarify something for me. You wrote: Line Spacing: Double-spaced. And then further down you wrote: Separation between sentences: One space. Do you mean “One space” between paragraphs? Or am I missing something? I think of a paragraph having multiple sentences, so how can you have double spacing for lines yet one spacing for sentences?

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    • Dax MacGregor

      Gary,

      The Boomer generation was taught to place two spaces after the period ending a sentence. Most of them learned “keyboarding” on typewriters, which mostly used monospace fonts. The extra space improved readability. Most Gen Xers (and all Millennials) learned to type on computers and were taught to leave a single space between sentences. For many years, this was a topic of heated discussion. A consensus finally coalesced within the past five years or so.

      So double-space your manuscript and separate sentences with a single space.

      Dax

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      • Gary

        Aha. You are talking about the space between the end of one sentence and the beginning of the next. I was really not reading your original post correctly. Since I am a boomer, yet quite immature, I use two spaces. That would be a hard one to stop since I just do it naturally. Thank you Dax

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        • Dax MacGregor

          I am a Boomer too. It takes a long time to change something that happens without conscious thought. I’m improving.

          Here’s a recommendation: Use the Search and Replace feature of your word processor to find all of the double-spaces after a period and replace them with a single space.

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          • Gary

            Thanks Dax, that is a great idea.

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  20. awakeinwisdom

    Dax,
    When you’re writing someone’s thoughts, are they italicized or should they be in single quotes?

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    • Dax MacGregor

      Use italics for internal thoughts.

      Sometimes I see inner thoughts formatted just like dialogue, but to me this invites confusion between actual dialogue and unspoken thoughts.

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  21. Jim

    Are manuscripts more commonly submitted to a potential agent in paper or electronic format?

    I f electronic, MS Word docx, pdf, txt, or ?

    How are photographs placed within a manuscript? Captions?

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    • Dax MacGregor

      Always follow the guidelines of the agent or publisher to whom you are submitting your manuscripts. Most often submissions will be requested in Microsoft Word format. The method of treatment of photographs and illustrations varies greatly.

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  22. Donna

    Thanks for this information. I write in MS Word. I’m confused about paragraphs. Some info out there says that you don’t indent the opening paragraph of a chapter or scene break. Does it depend on each agent/publisher? Also, I used the hit-the-space-bar-manually-five-times rule (if there is such a rule) for the first line on each paragraph of my manuscript. I didn’t use the tab button. I understand now that I should have set the indent in Word through Format->Paragraph->Section before I began writing and it would automatically indent the proper spacing. My manual spaces don’t look like they’re enough, even though I hit the space bar five times. I’m at a loss as to what to do with my completed manuscript that’s otherwise properly formatted. Thanks.

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    • micheldaw

      Hi Donna. To set the automatic indent: Right click on the Normal Style in the Styles area of the Home Ribbon. Select Modify… This opens the Modify Style dialog. In the bottom left corner, click the Format button, then select Paragraph… This opens the Paragraph dialog. On the Indents and Spacing Tab, under the Indentation section, use the Special: drop-down list to select First Line. In the By: Combo box beside it, enter 0.5″ if necessary. Click OK, OK.

      To remove you five spaces throughout your document, Click the Replace button on the Editing section of the Home Tab. In the Find What: field type five spaces. Leave the Replace With field blank. Click replace all.

      That should do it.

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  23. Claudia Orpin

    Hi, Dax, I’ve completed writing a novel in Pages. I’m a low level computer person. Is Pages similar to Word? Can I submit in Pages? Many thanks. Coop

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    • Dax MacGregor

      Claudia,

      When you are submitting your manuscript, you need to submit it in the format specified by the recipient. I’ve never seen any agent or publisher willing to accept submissions in Pages. You should be able to save your manuscript in MS-Word format by following the directions in this article.

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  24. Sandra Bender

    This is all such amazing and useful advice, thank you so much!!! Can I just ask – why not the indent for new paragraphs? I’ve only just finished formatting the first three chapters of my novel in preparation to start querying, but I did it all with indents! (Is there a quick way to undo that?? Help???)

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  25. Richard Copple

    Odd question…I’m a short story writer and I’ve been looking for (legitimate) places to submit my pieces, but with little luck. Is a manuscript normally required for these smaller pieces? 30-50 pages.

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  26. Dylan

    I’ve written a manuscript and originally it was told in 5 parts. After giving to some trusted readers, they gave feedback that the parts were too long and so I’ve begun breaking them into chapters. I understand that chapters start on a fresh page, but how should I break up my parts?

    Example:

    Part 1: Line 1
    Chapter 1: Line 2

    The text for this novel starts here. This is going to be a book. etc. etc. etc.

    I understand that line 1 starts 1/3 to 1/2 of the way down the page. The question is does line 2 go directly below line 1, would there be a space between line 1 and line 2, or would line 2 start on entirely new page because it’s the beginning of a chapter?

    Also, I noticed in the example there is extra space between the chapter heading and the beginning of the chapter. Is that formatting that adds a space after a paragraph or do you put an extra paragraph between the chapter heading and the actual text?

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  27. geeksintransit

    I have a small question. Should i include the table of contents when submitting?

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  28. Kathy

    Hi Dax – Appreciate your info so much. Two Questions. Is the format you are sharing Chicago style? Secondly, is it OK to put the author name/chapter name in the header on the left and the page formatting on the right? I cant’ seem to figure out how to make it all stay on the right in WORD. I’m pretty saavy in WORD and understand headers, but for the life of me, I can seem to keep the name/chapter/page# all on the right as in the examples you use for title and content pages! Sorry about the technical question.

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  29. ahunaohana

    You’re brilliant and you make me laugh. I really needed this info. Mahalo… (Thank you…)

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  30. Eric Levy

    after the chapter number (I have no titles) you say begin the text four lines down. Is that single or double space?

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  31. Mike

    Dax,
    Is there an affordable novel-writing software program that has automatic features that enables someone to concentrate on writing instead of formatting? An example of such features would be that it automatically inserts each page header information (author/title/incrementing page count), scene breaks with a single function key stroke, new chapter setup with single key stroke, new paragraph setup, etc.?
    Thanks, Mike

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  32. James

    Dax,

    Many times I’ve been told by my publishers not to indent the first line of the first para in any chapter or chapter section. It was a mistake I used to make, but I don’t do it any more.

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  33. tiasaray35gmailcom

    I have only one question. I have decided to make my own one copy of handmade book which would be kept as a memory of me writing my first book ever so, in that case, A5 layout is a little bigger than the normal classic books, i want to know what size of the paper is the best for my book! if you consider Harry Potter, i want to know the page size of it so that i can buy the papers! any help regarding this matter?

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  34. Maireade

    As an aspiring author, this is very helpful. Many websites have just given brief overviews that make no sense, granted this is still brief, but it easy to read and has everything I’ve (personally) been looking for. Thank you! – MWH

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  35. arion

    i am having trouble on how to set the header with the names and the continous number. may help me with that on the microsoft word 2016 setting? Thank you ????

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  36. Jane Thompson Hasenmueller

    Hi Dax, Thanks for the info, but I’m confused as to why I wouldn’t use the tab for the beginning of each paragraph! Can you explain why? How will I correct this? Go through paragraph by paragraph, or is that searchable, as you search for the two space after a period. Thanks for any info you can provide!

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  37. A.M. Shuler

    I am just starting to write my first novel (after vigorous outlining and planning) and this article helped so much in actually starting it. I read an article similar to this, in which it says that your agent’s (if you have one) information goes in the top left corner, while your own goes in the bottom right. Does this matter? If you don’t have an agent, can you put your information in the top left, as this article stated?

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  38. forrest

    Is it acceptable/common place to use single hash quotations when attributing faux dialogue to inanimate objects? example:

    Adam finished dressing, looked in the mirror. ‘You’re a loser,’ his pants accused. ‘I don’t care,’ answered his untucked shirt.

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  39. tinacrone

    Keep up that attitude you will not get published.

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  40. Janice white

    Thank you

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  41. HuntingViolets

    Manuscript formatting used to require underlining in the manuscript for words you wanted italicised/italicized in the published work. That is why the question was asked. There is no reason to be rude because you don’t understand why a question is asked. I know this was posted a long time ago, but . . .

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  42. angela eddins

    This was extremely helpful. I really want my manuscript to look polished before sending it to literary agents. I appreciate the time you spent writing this article to help newbies like myself!

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  43. Andrew Cloke

    I have a question – sometimes you get sketches or small drawings in the body of a novel. I’m not talking about illustrations, I mean like when someone picks up a note and then we see the handwriting of the note on the page, or, say – a newspaper article formatted like a real article, maybe with a photo – How do you indicate that this is what you want on your manuscript. I’m presuming you don’t actually draw or stick photos onto the page. Thanks.

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  44. Nafay Najeeb

    Andrew, you can simply describe the drawing– obviously through words– but if the note/handwriting includes in the manuscript, just describe it (like, sloppy, illegible, et cetera). However, if either the handwriting/note or the drawing is nondescript– which hardly ever happens– the problem rises.

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  45. Kathryn Tomkinson

    Thanks for this article, very helpful! One question—when starting a chapter a third to half way down the page, should this be by creating extra double-lined spaces before the chapter number or by creating a style for the chapter number with a big space-before in the paragraph settings?

    I ask because I would normally do the latter, but Microsoft Word 2016 will not let you do this any more, automatically suppressing paragraph spacing at the top of a page—very annoying! There are workarounds, but they are fairly clunky. Am I overthinking this? I used to do copy-editing/typesetting for a small POD Publisher some years ago (so creating styles and formatting is what I have been used to) but using an older version of Word this was never a problem!

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  46. Jeremy

    Ok question. I have parts of the dialogue for my fantasy novel which are actually telepathy. I am using italics to make it clear. Is that the proper format?

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  47. Jim Porter, Sr

    Jack, I used to be a acquisitions editor for a west coast publishing company. I can tell you’re an artist. Unfortunately, you’ll be an unpublished artist as long as you ignore manuscript guidelines for manuscript submissions. Those guidelines have now hardened into virtual rules within the industry. You’ll hate this: first readers and acquisitions editors look for any reason not to have to read an entire manuscript. As soon as a first reader or I saw a manuscript that didn’t follow the “rules,” I would clip a rejection notice onto the front page of the manuscript, slip it back into the envelope if the first reader hadn’t already done so (then called a SASE–a self-addressed, stamped envelope) for the mail crew to pick up out of my out box and return to the author. And, unfortunately, should the author not enclose a SASE, the mail crew would leave it for the shredding guy, who would pick it up after the editorial staff left for the day and drop it into the shredding bin. The manuscript submission guidelines have to do with making the job of the readers and editors on up the line easier because we had and they have an incredible amount of reading to do and, if the author doesn’t wish to help out in the process, so be it. On the other hand, if an acquisitions editor, such as I, despite the daily scramble to get through the pile, ran across and nicely done manuscript and found it to be that jewel I was looking for, then it was a great pleasure and feather in my cap to request authorization for purchase. Notice that my title was acquisitions editor. My job was to find publishable manuscripts. A sloppy manuscript pretty well defines the work as not publishable.

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  48. Robert Dixon

    So Dax, it looks like your book is in Latin? It’s been a long time since Octavius Augustus and I were classmates, but I am pretty sure that’s the language used there.

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  49. Liz

    As a former slush pile reader, we were ordered to reject any story out of hand that did not match the formatting requirements. There are too many stories. “If they can’t follow orders, don’t waste your time.” That was our credo. We were just a magazine, but we received at least twenty new submissions a day every day between the three of us slush pile readers. Other places get hundreds a day. So if you want your story to get read in the first place, you’re just going to have to get over it.

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  50. Stephen Wendell

    The passage of a short time can be represented with one extra line break (not two). A major lapse of time is indicated by the hash mark or asterisks.

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  51. Beth

    My manuscript is for a book that’s similar to the Wreck This Journal series. Should I format it so that each page is separated by a page break, essentially the way it would look as a published book?

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  52. Annie

    My book needs to have: written letters and emails, dialogue, diary writings and copies of legal documents and photos. I have been putting the diary writings in italics, the dialogue in normal font and putting a box around the legal documents. How do i show the letters and emails….indent?
    In other words, i have no idea how to format so many different forms of communication and i need help. Thank you.

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  53. Annie

    My book needs to have: written letters and emails, dialogue, diary writings and copies of legal documents and photos. I have been putting the diary writings in italics, the dialogue in normal font and putting a box around the legal documents. How do i show the letters and emails….indent?
    In other words, i have no idea how to format so many different forms of communication and i need help. Thank you.

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  54. JonniRose_SagePrairieStudio

    Tables of contents pages are required for setting up an eBook. The contents page is one way to jump to or return to a section in the book. Perhaps programs such as Scrivener can help with that sort of formatting.

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  55. bcmk1231

    Mr. Porter, et. al., I wish to concur and add that your expressed motivation for “acquiring” intellectual properties is an axiom across the intellectual property acquisition spectrum; whether writing novels, tech manuals, screenplays or blueprints for architectural designs. Unless an intellectual property creator [artist] intends to create/publish/produce/build, etc., all facets of a market/audience ready property/product for consumption/use, then the through-line from thought to delivery requires multiple individuals participation in order to deliver an artist’s vision to its audience/occupants. To refuse application of, or remain ignorant of the professional/requested ‘formatting’ elements of story, color, character, pallet, supplies, materials, etc., necessary for professional artistic expression, production and delivery is simply denying the “physics” necessary to perform the artist’s task properly, much less professionally. – professional/wga-member, produced screenwriter and wannabe novelist. (even my post requires editing…procrastinate or post — note to self – hire editor, post anyway 😉

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  56. J Dillon Fleming

    Would you format different parts of a book the same as a new chapter? Part 1 a page, chapter 1 a new page–then resume as normal till Part 2 comes at the end of some chapter?

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  57. BamaFool

    Would you format different parts of a book the same as a new chapter? Part 1 a page, chapter 1 a new page–then resume as normal till Part 2 comes at the end of some chapter?

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  58. Victor Yakubu

    Thanks for the mention of Page Four and Smart Edit in your comment. I just downloaded them for my use. I am playing around writing a novel some day and I am shopping for ideas from published authors and from experienced hands in the business. .

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  59. LUIS COLON

    I like to use a font that doesn’t tire my eyes, and when I’m done with my project, I (Ctrl A) and change the fonts to industry standards.

    Reply
  60. Michael Reynolds

    I’m adding a dedication page and a quote page at the beginning of my novel. How do you format those pages? Is it like chapters where you begin one-third of the way down, or is it something else entirely?

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  61. Hallie

    Lenna Wyatt: I agree about the font!

    Reply
  62. Wendy

    Hi Dax, Regarding Harlequin, what if you were sending the cover letter and manuscript do I number the letter page 1, title page 2 , first page of manuscript 3. Thanks for the info on one file, I was going to send them seperate

    Reply
  63. Frances E Nelson

    How can I do a global search and replace to remove 2 spaces after a sentence on a MAC in pages??

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  64. Hamid Qaasim

    I bought 2 books and read several articles. THIS IS THE BEST!! Simple To the point, no fanfare, just the facts. THANKS!!

    Reply
  65. Jessica

    Lenna, should we enter chapter page numbers at the start, or would this not be required as an editor at a publishing house will do a final edit?

    Reply
  66. Christopher Paisano

    How do I format section breaks? I read that I should use three asterisks, centered from the left. Should I end the paragraph, insert the asterisks, and then begin the next paragraph with no space? Thank you.

    Reply
  67. Nancy Ramm

    Question – If a chapter begins with dialog, should you indent or not? Also, it seems weird to me that the first paragraph in a chapter is not indented. What’s the reasoning behind that requirement?

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  68. D. Meredith Dobson

    What about a timeline? The story has movement over 2 countries and several locations in each. Also over a long period of years. A timeline seems right. How much detail and what if a location is repeated?

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  69. Rory Cunningham

    This looks just like what I needed to prepare my first novel for submission…Thank you.

    Reply
  70. Lindsay Smith

    This is so helpful and just what I needed. I get so overwhelmed with the mechanics of what is needed that it’s difficult to focus on the actual writing. I really appreciate this advice.

    Reply
  71. Deirdre DeMarsico

    Hi Mr. MacGregor,
    I am formatting my novel. After the title page, I have my dedication. Is the dedication page numbered as page one with the first page of the story as page 2?

    Reply
  72. Robin Sharma

    It is very helpful for first time author like me. I really don’t know about formatting of manuscript but now your blog has given me a great information. Thanks

    Reply
  73. JoAnn Vickers Wilburn

    Thanks for this information. I am getting ready to start what I hope will be my final draft of my book, and I want to change any formatting anomalies at the same time.

    My book is in four parts. For the title page of each part, I have formatted it using the chapter format style, but it reads Part I (centered) followed by a double space and the title of that part (centered) and then two double spaced lines and a quote that relates the that part of the book. On the next page, the first chapter of that section begins and follows the formatting you suggest. I do have the page number on the part pages as well.

    I have a couple questions.

    Does that sound like proper formatting?
    And, if I’m asked to send the first three to five chapters, do I include the Part 1 title page as well?

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  74. Robin Sharma

    It is really helpful for a fresher like me. I will apply all your points to make my first manuscript. Such a pearl in an ocean. Thanks.

    Reply

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