Omit Needless Words
After politely criticizing nearly every sentence in my first submission, my critique teammates suggested I read several books. Eager to learn, I ordered them all before I left the building.
When they arrived, one stood out: Strunk and White’s The Elements of Style. Because it was super-skinny I chose to read it first, thinking it would be a quick read.
I powered through the opening pages. “Form the possessive singular of nouns by adding ‘s.” OK, got it. “Do not break sentences in two.” No problem. I never do. In short order, I had polished off Section I.
I attacked the next section “Elementary Principles of Composition” without pause. After a few pages, my pace slowed. This section made me feel uneasy. For example, I already knew to “Use the active voice.” However, the critique team had pointed out a number of places where I had lapsed into passive voice.
After I read the segment: “Omit needless words,” I stopped.
I recall a time, when my drinking experience consisted of beer and cheap wine in screw-top bottles, a friend stopped by with a bottle of Grand Marnier. After filling two tumblers, we attempted to drink at our normal pace, which proved impossible. After a few gulps, we changed to sipping. By the time I finished the first glass, things looked different and my head buzzed.
That was how I felt after 25 pages of Strunk and White. The words were condensed and concentrated. Like a fine liquor, the contents needed to be sipped and savored. After gulping down my first glassful, I felt overwhelmed.
I spent several months reading and then re-reading The Elements of Style. After each sip from the pages, I’d inspect my work, looking for places where I could apply the concepts.
I spent a whole month incorporating the advice to “omit needless words.” I discovered my manuscript was filled with extraneous words that added little value. At first, it seemed counter-intuitive that stripping words added power and clarity. I had been inserting extra words in my attempts to add clarity. I’m still in awe at the degree of improvement fewer words can deliver.
I am aware that the book has its critics. There are several items where I disagree as well. But, pound for pound, this book has provided more value than any other in assisting me master the art of writing.
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