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	<description>Lessons Learned While Writing My First Novel</description>
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		<title>Comment on Condense a Novel into One-Page Synopsis in 22 Easy Steps by cars</title>
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		<dc:creator>cars</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 17 May 2013 20:17:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Struggling to get your car paid off? Are you mad about the last deal you got?
Perhaps you&#039;re looking for an automobile now, and you&#039;re not sure what 
to do differently. You&#039;re in the same boat with many other people. Keep reading to find out information regarding what to do next time you enter a dealership.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Struggling to get your car paid off? Are you mad about the last deal you got?<br />
Perhaps you&#8217;re looking for an automobile now, and you&#8217;re not sure what<br />
to do differently. You&#8217;re in the same boat with many other people. Keep reading to find out information regarding what to do next time you enter a dealership.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Till, &#8216;Til, Til or Until? by Joyce Seabolt</title>
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		<dc:creator>Joyce Seabolt</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 13 Feb 2013 15:53:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I lookded this up because my husband tried to use til in a Scrabble game and I challanged it.  Til was a word in the Scrabble dictionary but it did not mean until as he thought..]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I lookded this up because my husband tried to use til in a Scrabble game and I challanged it.  Til was a word in the Scrabble dictionary but it did not mean until as he thought..</p>
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		<title>Comment on Need Writing Assistance? Just Ask. Even the FBI Will Help! by Neville</title>
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		<dc:creator>Neville</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 25 Dec 2012 01:44:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[{Hi Neville here, I am a certiied PPM, and enjoyed reading this.&#124;FYI the first paragraph is misleading, Neville&#124;Neville here, you can try to view my blog for more project management tips&#124;I like the article, you can post to my site if you want, just contact me&#124;Would you be interested in writing for my blog, Neville.&#124;I have been a PMP professional for many years now, I enjoyed your insights, it is well thought out.&#124;Good write up, Neville&#124;Neville here, I would add your blog to my site if you want, just contact me}]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>{Hi Neville here, I am a certiied PPM, and enjoyed reading this.|FYI the first paragraph is misleading, Neville|Neville here, you can try to view my blog for more project management tips|I like the article, you can post to my site if you want, just contact me|Would you be interested in writing for my blog, Neville.|I have been a PMP professional for many years now, I enjoyed your insights, it is well thought out.|Good write up, Neville|Neville here, I would add your blog to my site if you want, just contact me}</p>
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		<title>Comment on Till, &#8216;Til, Til or Until? by John</title>
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		<dc:creator>John</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 06 Nov 2012 10:51:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I recently received a tattoo that reads till death, it seems that everyone loves to jump on the oppurnity to let me know that it is spelled incorrectly, As it should be &#039;til. It is becoming exhausting having to correct everyone!  Thanks for clearing that up.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I recently received a tattoo that reads till death, it seems that everyone loves to jump on the oppurnity to let me know that it is spelled incorrectly, As it should be &#8217;til. It is becoming exhausting having to correct everyone!  Thanks for clearing that up.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Need Writing Assistance? Just Ask. Even the FBI Will Help! by larry</title>
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		<dc:creator>larry</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 26 Jun 2012 00:08:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[That is so cool!! You really never know what will happen if you take a chance.... You are a go getter and you will be very successful....]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>That is so cool!! You really never know what will happen if you take a chance&#8230;. You are a go getter and you will be very successful&#8230;.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Proper Manuscript Format for a Novel by Marilyn Smith Neilans</title>
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		<dc:creator>Marilyn Smith Neilans</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 06 May 2012 17:14:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[A formatting note: Microsoft Word version 2010 has a ready-made template just for book manuscripts. It&#039;s easy and a wonderful timesaver. Just start your whole ms on that template, and it keeps everything just right for you.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A formatting note: Microsoft Word version 2010 has a ready-made template just for book manuscripts. It&#8217;s easy and a wonderful timesaver. Just start your whole ms on that template, and it keeps everything just right for you.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Interview: Terri Giuliano Long by To Plot or Not to Plot &#124; The Art &#38; Craft of Writing Creatively</title>
		<link>http://firstmanuscript.com/interview-terri-giuliano-long/#comment-364</link>
		<dc:creator>To Plot or Not to Plot &#124; The Art &#38; Craft of Writing Creatively</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 21 Mar 2012 17:35:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[[...] his recent interview, Dax McGregor asked me if I&#8217;m a plotter or a pantser &#8211; do I plot or go by the seat of [...]]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] his recent interview, Dax McGregor asked me if I&#8217;m a plotter or a pantser &#8211; do I plot or go by the seat of [...]</p>
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		<title>Comment on Creative Ways To Capture Research Notes by Newbie Author / Dax MacGregor</title>
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		<dc:creator>Newbie Author / Dax MacGregor</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 22 Dec 2011 03:53:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Ruth, 

I&#039;m not at your level yet. So far I&#039;ve just used video capture to document big picture items. It sounds like you&#039;ve taken it to a new level capturing artistic details that you&#039;ll translate into word pictures. Great idea!

Thanks for taking time to visit and share.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ruth, </p>
<p>I&#8217;m not at your level yet. So far I&#8217;ve just used video capture to document big picture items. It sounds like you&#8217;ve taken it to a new level capturing artistic details that you&#8217;ll translate into word pictures. Great idea!</p>
<p>Thanks for taking time to visit and share.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Creative Ways To Capture Research Notes by Ruth Long</title>
		<link>http://firstmanuscript.com/creative-ways-capture-research-notes/#comment-361</link>
		<dc:creator>Ruth Long</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 21 Dec 2011 22:07:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I&#039;m something of a fanatical researcher myself and use the still and video cameras in my smart phone to capture story elements. on a daily basis. 

Started with a little LG phone that only had a still camera. Changing to a Droid simplified my life and allowed me to get more precise data. 

Where before I&#039;d made do with the still of a particular  piece of architecture,  now  I was able to go back with the Droid&#039;s video capabilities and capture the impotent flag, rustle of vines on the  brick walls and the slow creep of shadows across the windows. 

Terrific post! Hope you&#039;re enjoying your time in the Big Sky Country.  :)]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m something of a fanatical researcher myself and use the still and video cameras in my smart phone to capture story elements. on a daily basis. </p>
<p>Started with a little LG phone that only had a still camera. Changing to a Droid simplified my life and allowed me to get more precise data. </p>
<p>Where before I&#8217;d made do with the still of a particular  piece of architecture,  now  I was able to go back with the Droid&#8217;s video capabilities and capture the impotent flag, rustle of vines on the  brick walls and the slow creep of shadows across the windows. </p>
<p>Terrific post! Hope you&#8217;re enjoying your time in the Big Sky Country.  <img src='http://firstmanuscript.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>Comment on Omit Needless Words by Vince</title>
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		<dc:creator>Vince</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 19 Dec 2011 17:45:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Should I look for a publisher yet?  ow do I locate a publisher?  Anything would be appreciated.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Should I look for a publisher yet?  ow do I locate a publisher?  Anything would be appreciated.</p>
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